|Reviews for Two Simple Truths|
| Kiwi-kiwi6 11/3/10 . chapter 1
Aww... I actually felt my heart breaking during this. I love the way you take two simple truths and contradict them.
| in theory 3/2/10 . chapter 1
I find the rhythm in this quite broken. It's not badly written at all, but just something about the sounds of the lines doesn't mesh as well as it could. Maybe that's intentional, given the subject...
and there's always 'a rat' in 'sepArate' (the ghost of my English teacher told me to tell you that :P)