|Reviews for Life's Elements|
| simpleplan13 2/19/10 . chapter 1
"We still insist to carry on"... phrasing here seemed off. You insist on something, not in something.
I like the piece. I think your descriptions here are really nice. I especially like the part about the flames. Well done.
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| Brianna Renee 2/16/10 . chapter 1
that was really meaning! i definetly agree with this poem. amazing work!