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| Isca 2/16/10 . chapter 1
"My quiet eyes." I love your use of the word "quiet" here; it's perfect.
"I think that I should save you from this place." I like the angsty tone of this line; it's like the speaker knows that she cannot save this other person, even though she knows she should.
| thinking.about.thinking 2/16/10 . chapter 1
Another absolutely beautiful poem. I love the last stanza.