You should try it in raven's point of would be interesting.i like your stories

Awww :3 Such a cute clihed story! I love cliches! Write more please :)

I really enjoyed this story! Annie was hilarious, from, "So, Ireland, huh?" to "Board games . . . We can play board games!" to "Yeah, well . . . you're not very good at life!" - In fact, if I were to give all her best quotes, I may be here a while!

I liked seeing Raven start out as arrogant, even a little rude (as odd as that sounds) because it gave his personality depth, and made for very entertaining verbal sparring contests between he and Annie.

The ending made me smile-I very much enjoyed seeing Raven really fall for Annie and vice versa, and the last line was a perfect way to finish off.

A really nice short story!

A.

ahhhhH! so cute! :D

please write other stuff, it was awesome and i want more... :)

i love the idea of a one-shot... cause i dont feel like i need to connect with the characters.. i can just enjoy their story! :)

Lol that was cute, a bit cliche but still cute. Oh and Raven is still a smexy name even if it could be a girl's name too.

so. so. cute. :3

Im irish and ye kinda got the whole Irish lad thing goin wrong but nevertheless I liked it ) Fyi: if your ever gonna do another irish story never call an irish lad Raven. Stick to irish names like Ronan and Oisean to keep it realistic. Btw i did love this as well :L

-Dearbhla

PS. Yeah, i have an irish name xD

Haha that was cute.

Irish accents are so sexy. Pretty much all accents are sexy except for my American one. [

And Annie dressing up as Dwight awesome. ]

awwh, cute! :)

This was insanely cute. Cliche, yes. Cheesy, yes. But that's okay because it's adorableness makes up for it. Plus who doesn't like cliche cheesy oneshots?

Anyway. There were a few times in this when you switched back and forth between present tense and past tense, but other than that, I couldn't find any mistakes technique wise. I like your characters and the whole breaking-the-world-record thing quite a bit. (: Original idea!

Good job, awesome oneshot!

Hey, um...just wondering. This might sound pretty stupid but how do you put stries on this site? Theres a whole, Word-doc, it's easier on quizilla, but I'd still like to try...

"Paige, I am going to kill you. I don't know when; I don't know how. But I will kill you," - i so love that line.

nice story :)

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anywho, i thought that because you read my story that i would read yours, and i am so glad that i did. that was so cute, and i think you should write more stories. people would enjoy them.

That was really cute! :) Annie was hilarious. Awesome :)

This was very sweet. :) And the humor was awesome! Great Job! Keep up the writing! :)