|Reviews for Breaking the World Record|
| PermanentNewGirl 2/24/12 . chapter 1
You should try it in raven's point of would be interesting.i like your stories
| the poison apple 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Awww :3 Such a cute clihed story! I love cliches! Write more please :)
| L.Shan 8/6/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story! Annie was hilarious, from, "So, Ireland, huh?" to "Board games . . . We can play board games!" to "Yeah, well . . . you're not very good at life!" - In fact, if I were to give all her best quotes, I may be here a while!
I liked seeing Raven start out as arrogant, even a little rude (as odd as that sounds) because it gave his personality depth, and made for very entertaining verbal sparring contests between he and Annie.
The ending made me smile-I very much enjoyed seeing Raven really fall for Annie and vice versa, and the last line was a perfect way to finish off.
A really nice short story!
| kj236 8/6/11 . chapter 1
ahhhhH! so cute! :D
please write other stuff, it was awesome and i want more... :)
i love the idea of a one-shot... cause i dont feel like i need to connect with the characters.. i can just enjoy their story! :)
| Novocaine for the Soul 6/15/11 . chapter 1
Lol that was cute, a bit cliche but still cute. Oh and Raven is still a smexy name even if it could be a girl's name too.
| writewithcourage 9/17/10 . chapter 1
so. so. cute. :3
| Romantic Rebel 7/26/10 . chapter 1
Im irish and ye kinda got the whole Irish lad thing goin wrong but nevertheless I liked it ) Fyi: if your ever gonna do another irish story never call an irish lad Raven. Stick to irish names like Ronan and Oisean to keep it realistic. Btw i did love this as well :L
PS. Yeah, i have an irish name xD
| asianinvasion0530 7/12/10 . chapter 1
Haha that was cute.
Irish accents are so sexy. Pretty much all accents are sexy except for my American one. [
And Annie dressing up as Dwight awesome. ]
| toffeecakesxox 5/19/10 . chapter 1
awwh, cute! :)
| Kyllex 4/19/10 . chapter 1
This was insanely cute. Cliche, yes. Cheesy, yes. But that's okay because it's adorableness makes up for it. Plus who doesn't like cliche cheesy oneshots?
Anyway. There were a few times in this when you switched back and forth between present tense and past tense, but other than that, I couldn't find any mistakes technique wise. I like your characters and the whole breaking-the-world-record thing quite a bit. (: Original idea!
Good job, awesome oneshot!
| Shakiral 4/16/10 . chapter 1
Hey, um...just wondering. This might sound pretty stupid but how do you put stries on this site? Theres a whole, Word-doc, it's easier on quizilla, but I'd still like to try...
| chocoholic dreamer 3/22/10 . chapter 1
"Paige, I am going to kill you. I don't know when; I don't know how. But I will kill you," - i so love that line.
nice story :)
| AthenaMaverick 3/16/10 . chapter 1
too lazy to sign in
anywho, i thought that because you read my story that i would read yours, and i am so glad that i did. that was so cute, and i think you should write more stories. people would enjoy them.
| dear-llama 3/11/10 . chapter 1
That was really cute! :) Annie was hilarious. Awesome :)
| SuzyJane 2/26/10 . chapter 1
This was very sweet. :) And the humor was awesome! Great Job! Keep up the writing! :)