|Reviews for Defective Heroes|
| static shakedown 8/2/10 . chapter 2
I like this.
| nickyO 7/17/10 . chapter 25
| nickyO 6/8/10 . chapter 23
| nickyO 5/31/10 . chapter 24
You've done a good job of expressing the high to low of emotions. Being so in love and then hitting an uncomfortable reality.
| nickyO 5/14/10 . chapter 22
This reminds me of a gift from a lover who one may feel is over attentive. Good work.
| Eternal Skies 5/8/10 . chapter 4
does that mean you're not real to people?
or people are so fake they're like paper?
loved the haiku though, interesting point of view
| Eternal Skies 5/8/10 . chapter 3
*shudders* that's scary but still true
how about we dig a hole for two?
sometimes i feel like crawling underground too o_O
| Eternal Skies 5/8/10 . chapter 2
ya i think i see it. kind of
found this haiku pretty neat even though i didn't completely understand the haiku. is it about white flowers or that's just a metaphor that's applicable to people?
| nickyO 5/6/10 . chapter 21
Honest and well written/like the heart in this one.
| frugale 5/4/10 . chapter 21
interesting... an unusually sad!
| nickyO 5/2/10 . chapter 20
Mariah's pretty lucky to inspire such loving words. :)
| frugale 5/2/10 . chapter 20
This one evokes all kinds of cute situations/stories in my head. I love you for that :)
| frugale 5/2/10 . chapter 19
I love your use of the word despondency in this. Fits the title so well, too.
| frugale 5/2/10 . chapter 18
I don't understand anything, but it's whimsical and beautiful nonetheless!
| frugale 4/28/10 . chapter 13
Brilliance. There should be a Postapocalyptic category in the genres just for you. This very haiku justifies it!