Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed 11 and 12. I've been busy with work and all. Anyway, this sounds good so far. The plot is thickens...or something thereof. Anyway, hopefully you will update soon and I'll be able to get to it soon after.

I love it!

I love this story! It is well written, (cept for some minor spelling mistakes in earlier chapters)and I hope you are still writing more.

This is great so far, I will continue reading this story. I have to say though, you should look over your spelling and grammar. You have a bunch of small mistakes. Ex. 'he trick was not to dwell on itm just to pick up the phone' That was the first sentence I came across.

Amazing! write more! cant wait. i love this story :)

i really enjoy this story one of the best i have read since i started this site cant wait for more

i love your story it kicks ** and i hope you write more soon there are some typos but hey eveyone makes mistakes just keep up the good work i cant wait for more to come

I am so glad to see updates after so long. i was pretty bummed after hearing nothing after chapter 5 and then years later, i remember your story, checked again and so so so insanely glad to see you hadn't completely abandoned it! thank you so much!

OMG! this story is just utterly and completely awesome! write MORE soon plz!

nice fic =) do you plan on finishing it?

This seems to be what can become extremely good. I mean, it's good now but it can get better...Then again, it is the beginning...I can't wait for more!

Later!

This piece of work is absolutely wonderful. Keep working on it. I love the idea of a half-breed vampire. I can't wait to read more.

I have to say, this is one of the better vampire fics that I have found. Quite different from the rest and very pleasing. Please don't stop writing this story, it would be such a shame to see one of the better ones go dead.

lovely story so far. well written, strong characters, plot ect... update when you can.

I forgot just how good this story is. I LOVE IT!

You kinda lost me on the whole orange juice thing though.

I can hardly wait until the next chapter.

-Crimson Ara