|Reviews for I miss|
| tolerate 10/10/11 . chapter 1
This was absolutely beautiful. This poem was made up of very simple words, and yet it can create large impacts on the reader. Despite you repeating the words 'I will miss', it still has that feeling. The entire poem was really beautiful. I feel that I could relate to it well, though I've never been in a relationship before. Thanks for writing!
| Isca 2/18/10 . chapter 1
I think the title should be "I will miss."
"Around me waist." It should be "my."
"I will miss everything I saw in you." This is my favourite line; the tone is so heart-breaking and beautiful.