That's a pretty good opening chapter, really sets a good tone for everything. Clearly it's about to be a memorable weekend, probably in more ways than one. I say you should publish chapter 2 and keep it going. Good job!

i think you've got a really good start here :) trina and rose kinds sounds like me and my best friends lol cuz we're both really stubborn haha anyways update soon (: and sorry about the writers block on ur other stories. i know thats no fun

an interesting chap.. i wonder how the story will goes

OK first kudos on great original-ness (if thats a word) and second i really hope you update soon, this seems to be good story. anyways thanks for posting it! :)

Meli

please update soon iam looking forward to reading more!