That was another good chapter. I've enjoyed seeing the past battle chapters. I spotted one possible error in this chapter. You had; "Shin have to lost to you..." where I think you mean to have "Shin may have lost to you...". Otherwise it was well written. We see Atsuko win her fight, and Ameno is also taken down. So there is still Date and Yuu left. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the good writing.

author's note: so this is where u get some of ur ideas. classic manga like that are always an inspiration :) haha i was wondering how u are portraying all these stock personality tropes so wonderfully. xD

"You saw my real body," Atsuko said. She grinned. "Were you stunned by my beauty? I wouldn't blame you. I sure am sexy…"

you sir, are brilliant! lol'ed so hard at that xD

sorry for spamming ur story, i rly love this series xD

i'm beginning to feel that this story has the most trope heavy story i have ever read. good lord knows i love a good shounen action manga :P

author's note: I feel your pain man, I feel ur pain.

At first when I read that Kota was stopping Ameno from getting closer to "the room", I thought Kota was Kira, or someone else from Senji Works coming to help Rei and Harima. Instead, its the actual Kota and not an imposter. Well, if it was an imposter, it'd make this story cliche, and this story is definitely NOT cliche (in most senses).

Harima is one lucky guy, apparently. It looks like Rei-chan's starting to develop a crush on him. Plus, he's already got Yuki liking him. What I'm amazed about after reading the profile is that Yuki didn't leave to follow Hiroto. Then again, the guy did try attacking everyone...

Hurray for Atsuko-chan beating Natsume! Just wondering, but is Natsume really killed? Its sort of implied but I just want to know...Finally, Senji and Yuu will fight. I wonder how Yuu's going to use his power in this fight.

Keep up the writing and your amazing creativity! Happy summer!

O.O

Cool!

You, sir, have a shit-ton of chapters.

O.O oooo...

I suddenly have a feeling that all four of these battles (now three) will eventually all meet in one place. Then a giant free-for-all will happen. Thus, much blood and gore along with someone probably almost dying. My mind is slowly becoming morbid. Fear for your life xD

So...this chapter. Humm. I like Ameno being thrown out of the room. And I like Rei-chan's comment about that, too. Such a sweet little girl showing so much anger. It's cute. I'm amazed Harima can run so long. And is STILL running. The boy should join cross country. The random scene between Atsuko and Lin was funny. But the resolution, of course, became interesting. AND THUS ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER. grr. You just love having cliff hangers now huh?

Ooh Lin has a new ability! Shadows...sounds very ominous. I was hoping for a snippet of Harima's fight as well, but that's okay. Rotating three-way fights are good enough. I'm suddenly scared of Natsumi because of her last comment. For some reason, I want to have a metabolism like that girl (besides the fact of being forever hungry. Food is good).

Yes another Senji Works profile! I didn't know Atsuko's Free was called Emotional Princess. It explains a lot. I haven't seen mention of her Mental Free since the beginning chapters of this story. It's good to be reminded. Huh. So that's how she gets that super strength. This is why I love these profiles Can't wait to see more of them.

Your special chapters are so cute! I really like your style and I think your story is pretty epic. Senji in your story reminds me a little bit of the Senji in bleach. Not super much though.

Whee the special was funny I've already read your other story with Sadame in it (still waiting for update) and I like the interaction of the cross-over. Freaking Senji, just because of a magazine ending? I agree with Sadame never to let the guy come back.

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Ahhh four battles at once ! I thought Atsuko didn't like to use her adult form. Natsume...Her power should be to make metal or something like that, huh? Well, that's from guessing with the plate.

It amuses me to imagine Harima running around a roof dodging blades. If the Fear of Blades is Harima's age, technically he isn't a man yet, right? Who does the Fear of Blades work for or is he one of the Fears of Life?

Poor Rei-chan. I wonder how she's going to get out alive. Her Soul Free doesn't help her keep her thoughts from being stolen. I can't believe Ameno had tried bribing her, too. Typical businessmen, trying to get more money for their companies, etc.

Lin looks like his battle will be the easiest out of everyone. Lucky him. Too bad Harima didn't get the Fear of Extinction. Then again, Harima probably would've had a lower chance than Lin to kill the guy.

Looking forward to the next chapter (and good luck with the rewrites as well as the profiles. I want to read more of those)

Hello, it's been a while.

The concept of your story is quite interesting, I must say. This story sure has its own charm, and it is a very good thing. The way Senji and Atsuko speak with their customer is comedy gold too.

The way you explained their powers is interesting too. This story reminds me of Get Backers due to some reasons. And then, there's Kira. The power of getting rid of attention is rare but it sounds interesting. I wonder how it will work out in later chapters. Anyway, I'll be reading the next chapters, if I have time. Then, why don't you go and read my story as well. I'll be happy if you do that.

Louis the Magnificent

I like the characters and their powers but the whole "agency that works as long as you pay" reminds me of animes like Gintama, xHolic, Devil May Cry.

There's also some capitalisation and grammer problems in the first chapter which I'm sure you might be aware of but not have the time to fix.

I'd like to see where you take the story so I'll keep reading.

Your writing makes it easy to imagine the scenes :)