I couldn't help but laugh at that last line. He has to keep an "eye" on her if you know what I mean lol

love it!

Aw.. that cute lil' ol' cowboy cares about Riley? Who wouda known... he he. )

"It had never been questioned in her mind only because she never thought her father wouldn't not pay for her safe return."

There are too many negatives in this sentence. The not needs to go away.

Riley might be spirited, but she is totally naive. It's so funny that she thought any of the boys would actually do the dishes. They kidnapped her! Does she really think they'll abide by proper etiquette? XD

I just about cursed out loud when they just left the dishes with her expecting her to clean it. ughh, I hate when guys do that. :(

-Liz :D

I hope your appointment goes alright. Riley is so funny with all her little quirks and stuff. lol. Update soon :)

Loved it, update soon!

hahah the last part waz funny

:)

"You kidnapped and murdered someone three times."

"No that's just impossible"

This was a fun exchange between the two of them :)

You know, I would love to see some sort of reenactment of Riley wielding a frying pan at Clint, which would make sense somehow given she's now cooking for them all and would have ample opportunity.

haha lovelovelove it!

Hehehe i love the ending! Update soon :)

Bits of fluff in here if I squinted real hard. :"D Quite a chapter, really. And you've got to pity Riley. I mean, if I had a dad like hers, I would have run away years ago. Or eloped. Either way I would have gotten as far away from his as I could. Nice chapter, by the way, and I hope you update soon!

they r getting along now

this story is rlly good. plz update!