"Until we align." This was the most powerful line from the poem for me. I love the idea that lovers, like the stars perhaps, need to "align" properly for their love/light to be properly expressed.

A well written sonnet. Beautiful and great imagery as well. The love in this felt realistic and tasteful, and not smutty at all.

What I really liked about this was the fact that it managed to encapsulate that rushed ethereal feeling passion can bring about. As always fantastic use of words but I think what really stood out for me was the fact that it seemed so intimate without being pornographic.

I like this one. It's intense without being explicit; personal and yet... there is something so much bigger to it. I am at a loss for the word right now. "vertebrae, knee caps, eye sockets, until we align" ...I don't know. It's a little surreal and mythical.