this is one of the most beautiful and sincere things I've ever read. I have goosebumps and I nearly cried and I have never felt like crying when reading poetry. I know someone who thinks that pain without acknowledgment of beauty in poetry contains depth and this proves it wrong a hundred times over.

untangle him from my past and unwind me;

- loved that bit ]

Ah absolutely beautiful:) I love this formatting style, though I've never been successful with it myself. I usually try to compose my review of a positive and a negative comment, but there simply isn't anything I can see that could be improved:]

Basically...I LOVE it:)