|Reviews for Bridge the Gap|
| Isca 2/26/10 . chapter 1
"I want to matter to him." The tone of this line is so angsty. I love it.
"But now it's like there's a gap between us." This line in itself isn't that creative, but the formatting of the poem is. I like that you created a "gap" to physically show the "gap" that this man has left in the speaker's heart.
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis 2/25/10 . chapter 1
I know how that feels...
| sealednectar 2/25/10 . chapter 1
Easy to read and understand. It's easy to relate to the speaker.