You describe things beautifully. I love your choice of words, thank you for writing!

Beautiful imagery and intriguing. My favorite line was about the watchmen pigeonholed - cleverly written.

"The ocher afterglow." I like this image - it's so gentle.

"Hungry watchmen pigeonholed behind the guise." Excellent writing here. I like your use of the words "pigeonholed" and "guise."

"And Johanna is a vision of something silent." Beautiful. This is one of the best lines from the poem - it's quite striking.

"The rosary beads." There's something subtly profound about this line. I like it. Like Johanna has a touch of "God" in her.

"How it fights for the sight of her." Wow. I'm very impressed by this line; the tone is absolutely perfect.