|Reviews for Decadent Haiku|
| kloun mannequin 9/2/10 . chapter 1
I like the part about the woman forgetting the world.
| LMSmythe 6/26/10 . chapter 1
This piece it great!
It makes me crave a massage!
Your language is well chosen, conveying the woman's releif of stress/tension effectively.
I love it.
| Jeannie-Redd 5/4/10 . chapter 1
Well done. Made me wish for a massage since I could use one about now.
| Punslinger 4/6/10 . chapter 1
Excellent haikus and a sharp character sketch. Some people might frown on such decadent self-indulgence. But I say: when you have it, enjoy it!
| bunny.one.three 3/16/10 . chapter 1
Good, good. I'd definitely want a massage like that. Anyone would.
| nickyO 2/28/10 . chapter 1
Sounds nice. :)
| Bddssgsydhdndk 2/28/10 . chapter 1
Man would I like to enjoy a massage right about now! I thought it was really good. Alot of people can relate to it. The stressful days...going to the spa to relax. I like how you take real asspects of life and turn them into poems or haikus that make up a poem. Again. you did great on this. You are a truely talents writer and poet. Keep it up!
| sealednectar 2/26/10 . chapter 1
Lovely. I wish that was me.
| frugale 2/26/10 . chapter 1
I was intrigued by the summary, and discovered an interesting haiku series beyond it. Nicely done!