I like the part about the woman forgetting the world.

This piece it great!

It makes me crave a massage!

Your language is well chosen, conveying the woman's releif of stress/tension effectively.

I love it.

Well done. Made me wish for a massage since I could use one about now.

Excellent haikus and a sharp character sketch. Some people might frown on such decadent self-indulgence. But I say: when you have it, enjoy it!

Good, good. I'd definitely want a massage like that. Anyone would.

Sounds nice. :)

Man would I like to enjoy a massage right about now! I thought it was really good. Alot of people can relate to it. The stressful days...going to the spa to relax. I like how you take real asspects of life and turn them into poems or haikus that make up a poem. Again. you did great on this. You are a truely talents writer and poet. Keep it up!

Katie

Lovely. I wish that was me.

I was intrigued by the summary, and discovered an interesting haiku series beyond it. Nicely done!