This was really good! I wish it wasn't a Oneshot :( I thought you used description well, and used dark words which really made a difference. The way you slowly revealed Ronnie's various difficulties is amazing. I also love the way you described Ronnie's bond with his journal. Like it was his friend. But yea, this was a FAB piece of writing! I look forward to reading your other works _

The Power of the Pen

Oh, wow... I'm not really sure what to say... That was touching. I know the feeling... I haven't ever been nearly as bad off as he is, but I know the feeling... Like you're too exausted to even bother living anymore. I've read a lot of stuff you've written, and this may be the best. I love it, in a weird, sick, twisted way. I love it.