This is a really nice story. The style is fun and engaging. I hope you will update this soon :D

... and that was the last time we have heard of this author. will you ever continue or is this story caput?

Awesome story!

...I'm hoping for an orgy at some point... Don't look at me like that, I'm entitled to my fantasies... :/So anywho, I am lovinh this story so far, seriously the most original parody of any fairy tale I have ever written:D

FANGIRL WANT MORE ARRGH!

Ops sorry, that was my inner yaoi zombie coming up for a breather

omgs a magical cage lulz. You just made a fujoshi very happy *gives cookie*

rofl. i love lamany's past xD he basically grew up doing chores. i kinda feel bad for him on that part, though. D:

the messenger's clothing made me rofl too xD the pink and the purple and ribbons descriptions are even worse for me because i like pretty boys, and i imagine pink and purple and ribbons... and yeah.

as for grammar, 'ok' should just be 'okay' (tbh, i hate reading the word 'ok' _)

and when you do dialogue, it always ends with a comma or period. a period if you're making them do something that has nothing to do with their speech... like, "I had cookies." He /waved/ compared to "I had cookies," he /said/

i hope i didn't confuse you T_T

Wow, this is going to be really fun.

You even have a crossdresser. You are so set. Poor Lamany though and the loan sharks are freaking scary! I like the fairy godfather. He seems like an interesting and fun guy. Also, I can't wait for Harvard is going to do. And yes, I'm so going to join him on his epic plot to bring the council down! Wow, I really like you characters.

teehee seems like a cute story you have going here, keep up the good work! I really want to find out what happens next!

Baw I just wanna hug Lamany!

Wow, this is so cute! Funny, but not im a just plain stupid way! It has no errors, either! Yay! So many funny stories completely fail at mechanics. Hehe . . . Lamay is to cute! Like, bishie-mpreg cute! I love him and Harvard so, so much. Maybe something can happen with the messenger . . .?

Moore. Nice fantasy, I can't wait until the next chapter.

I love your story and hope you continue with it.

UGHH. I LOVE IT.

Keep going

ahaha Cute how loving Cindertella is, despite her meanness.

Can't wait till we meet the prince! * U*

LOL! I'm honored that you're honored!

These fairies sound like a load of laughs! I can hardly wait for the fun to really begin! That prince is probably in for it, too, huh? LOL!

lulz. Me thinks that Lamany will end up with Evil Wizard Harvard Bario as his 'fairy godmother'. I love the whole plot that the fairy godmothers are running out of godmothers because of the lustful curse! Keep up the good work

*smiles*

No, no, Harvard seems so much fun! Just going to a ball to see the craziness, I mean, that's what I would do if I couldn't have any magic spells. Stupid older wizards, ruining the fun!

Also, the kittens? I think that was the best part of your chapter... that and the un-named fairy at the end. She seems fun too! I think it could be hilarious if you made she a yaoi fangirl or something. Nothing *sarcasm* could possibly could go wrong! XD

can't wait for the next chapter, Lamany and Harvard are so cute! together? Not sure, but I'll be waiting for your brilliance!