OMG! sorry I haven't reviewed in forever! I loved this chapter. Congrats to Seth and Mirage with baby Lucy. I love her name. It fits her. :) Amazing story!

awww baby lucy! :) babies are sooo precious

Ohmigawd! Sunshine (Lucy) is born! Haha I have to say, this is my favorite chapter YET! but I have one question... Is the story over soon? Or do we get to hear even more?

You got the name from a Skillet song? I love Skillet!

A www.. Thank you sooooo much! I asked you to explain why she felt like taking Le pregger test, and you answered with Le chapter! And also, FINALLY HER WATER BROKE! THATS THE LONGEST GOSH DARN LABOR I'VE... I MEAN MIRA HAS HAD TO ENDURE! Three whole chapters, my foot! But good job in doing so. An excellent installment to this story, if I must say so myself. And very clever using Mac Taylor from CSI to cover up Marli's crush on Zach! And O MY GOD AUDREY WAS OUT OF HER FLIPPING MIND! But that would be ironic if she got pregnant like Mira did. Lol haha keep up the good work and hopefully post again soon!

What I find cool is how you have developed the characters in the course of this story. Especially Mira and Seth. I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter, so please update quickly! :D Otherwise I might just die... or something. o.0 Both me and my sister are obsessed with this story. lolz.

Keep it up!

Natalie

OMG she needs to have the baby. But still I think it should be either a boy named Noah Andrew, or a girl named Grace Lynn. And of course have what ever last name the two choose. So yeah. Please update soon.

oh my god,now remembering when i had my baby, i had to wait hour an half, my water broke while i was at home so my sister got me to the hospitable. it was insane!but anyways really good chapter! i loved it!update soon. sorry for not reviewing,first my computer blocked this website, second i forgot my password, and the one they gave me didn't work but now it works...so i have to change my password now! really good chapter! update soon as you can!

Not much to say. Somehow you always manage to put in some sort of joke or comedy in the middle of something serious. I love the Mac Taylor thing. There's really nothing I can say without repeating myself, so coming up: Sunshine is born. I think it's going to be a boy. I wish it was a girl, but I think it's going to be a boy. Either way, you're going to have some people telling you this is too much like Glee or The Secret Life. Probably less if you go with a girl because Quinn and Puck gave Beth away. Oh, and I can't wait for the name! Can't wait! Until next chapter,

-IAmEmeraldfae

Yay! So close! Sooo excited!

Do I even have to ask? Please oh lord please! Get on your computer and make your little fingers type the nxt fucking chapter ! I'm so excited to find out if it's a boy or a girl, what Seth & Mira will really name Sunshine and how it all ends. You have to make a sequel where they raise the baby! Can't wait! Best author out!

Please update soon! This is such a realistic story! As a teen mother myself, I can totally relate to being in Mira's shoes. I was shocked at how close this story is to what I went to; my pregnancy broke up my family and then brought us back together, the father often slept around and then we ended up falling in love, my friends were just like Paige and Sara and I went thru similar torments that Mira went thru (minus an abusive relationship and there was certainly no one getting stabbed!) Seth is/was soo much like my boyfriend! At first he was the total badass and every girl at school was falling over him and just over a year later we have a son and are in a very good relationship. I love this story!

Yay! :D I'm excited for sunshine!

Its good, you are showing a realistic labour

Amazing chapter! I loved seeing the flaahbacks to how things were eight months ago and then how things are now :) Update soon!