Aw how sweet :) love your characters !

This is like, my favorite story. I love it :)

Awww! That was hot! :P I really enjoyed reading your story, especially since I have been bullied when I was a kid... and I used to dream of a prince or a knight in a shining armor! Now that I'm older, I have the chance to have a boyfriend who showed me he was ready to save me in his own way! So I felt a little like Jade (except that I'm a girl...), and it means that you did a great job as I writer! I can't wait to read the other stories you wrote!

pinote007

P.S.: Forgive me for the grammar of my message, English isn't my first language... French is. :)

Nice story! I like it! XD

i like the story very much. down to earth, funny and sweet. thank you for sharing :)

i'm in love, and his name happens to be everybody needs a hero. i love your writing stylel, and i love love love jade's and dean's interractions. ah, love

Jade is CHUBBY! I so love you for that. I get tired of the perfect body people... pssh, like they are even *really* all that (real life issues making themselves known lol) But seriously, this was a wonderful stroy

Ehehehehe :D Very pretty! Love

*laughs* I don't know why, but really, I found this story really, really funny. I especially liked the part where he Jaden poked his tummy. I could SO identify with that. I like Dean. He's such a dick, but a sweet one anyway. *laughs* Nice short. :)

Hello Elkica,

My name is Silver Sooner. I think your story is very good. I don't know why, but I can't help but love a good romance story, You seem to have a great way of keeping things interesting. Nice Job! I write a couple of stories on fictionpress also, but I've only been doing so for almost a year. If you want you can check them out. Thanks, and again awesome story!

Silver Sooner

loved it ,I loved Jade and I wanted to smack Dean then he redeamed himself when he called off the bullies .loved the turn in the story and the sex scene was great .

Wow i know it's been a while since i've commented but i have been reading a whole lot and real life comes a knocking. This is damn good to bad it a one shot. or maybe not?