|Reviews for Retribution|
| Isca 3/6/10 . chapter 1
"She slithers under my skirt." A striking sexual image.
"We play for the rush, for the thrash." I like your use of the word "thrash" here - it's quite vivid.
"I can keep my eyes closed and navigate the world." Oh, wow. I like the idea that, in when enraptured, the speaker can remain in control.
"And I take the hand of a man. A saviour." This is the best part of the poem!
| Annabella x 3/6/10 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this was amazing. It is so deep and profound!
Wow, I love it. I could seriously never do anything like this. Wow.