I liked the story, I liked the idea, I could see what you were doing, but it was difficult to catch it on the first read. I think a small problem was it was a very dry read. Lots of terminology, dry humor, and a somewhat confusing viewpoint to start out. I wasn't sure at first if it was a memo, a newspaper article, or just third person POV. The brainstorming was also a little confusing at first. Maybe (If I could be so bold) you could have underclassmen standing on ladders, dropping brains on the professors, instead of them throwing brains at each other. Then it would truly be "brainstorming". I do think it's awesome to make fun of zombies, it is something original and a little off kilter (which is what I like in humor anyway). Overall, I really liked your story, it just took a little getting used to.

This sounds so professional, surprising in a parody. Despite the short length I greatly enjoyed it.

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While the brains made me feel a tad bit queasy, I have to admit that my experience with universities made me love this. Thank you for PMing me about my community, I never would have found this story otherwise!

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This is an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where you go with this.

Keep up the good work.

That was hilarious, however in paragraph 4 you repeated 'recommend that' twice, I would omit one entry.

Well done!