|Reviews for Through the apple maggot quarantine regions|
| KaenaFolcun 3/10/10 . chapter 1
I came back to read this and discovered that i really DO love it.
it's odd, every time i reread one of your works, i find new sentences, phrases that hit me deep. it feels like for once, the magic of words can't tire itself out.
Thank you for that, btw.
| Isca 3/5/10 . chapter 1
"The apple-maggot-quarantine regions." I like the apple-maggot imagery; there's something very Pandora & Eve-esque about it.
"You screamed fuck fuck fuck fuck at the top of your
lungs as though words could erase the action." This is my favourite line; it's relatable, and yet, somehow still very profound. :)
| Brenda Agaro 3/4/10 . chapter 1
I like the use of second person in this poem. It makes it effective, especially with the tone.
| in theory 3/4/10 . chapter 1
I love how you sharply address yourself in this, almost like you're issuing a warning, or hinting that one is due.
words (not uncommon in poetry)
haha I love that expression, I found it sarcastic but perfectly appropriate. 'Free of forethought' is another expression used that instantly needs a lot of thought. The end of innocence was my most liberating memory, but yeah now I wonder how anything dragged itself through all that childish wailing.
Thought provoking, well more demanding, as usual. Hope you're keeping well :)
| KaenaFolcun 3/3/10 . chapter 1
This is beautiful...
i love how its all put together... "That same sky dead as your shoes wove a tale of sound into the cold breaking of the dusk." this makes me remember walking night through day on cobbled roads for some reason... :)