YAY!

An update

I'm a little lost haha but I know you'll tell us what happened eventually

Can't wait for more!

Update soon!

Loved it, update soon!

Loved it, update soon!

Wow. I love you and your super-fast updates. Connor is still adorable and I can't wait to see more of his sessions with Naomi - I think there's definitely room for intrigue there! He's such a wonderful character - sure, he's cute but he's interesting as well and that's always important, of course :) I like how Milly/Connor's relationship isn't all sex-boom-boom-boom - it's sweet, tender and gradually progressing.

Jake and Georgia are amazing - I love Georgia's panic at the beginning of chapter five(?) where she's wondering whether Jake's texted her back or when he'll do it, because we all know we panic over texts like that as well. *Grin* I think on terms of characters, I'm leaning more towards Georgia but I adore Milly and Connor as well.

With Milly/Connor and Jake/Georgia in the picture, the James/Finn/Leia bit seems a bit disjointed. I haven't got the same feel about them as I do with the other four...but maybe with time and more chapters they'll grow on me. There's nothing bad about them, but I don't get the same buzz from 'em either. Still, I am enjoying your story and I can't wait for more. :)

Loved it, glad for the fast updates! And so again update soon!

Wow, you update fast. Great story by the way.

Oh this is really quite something special, and different. Connor is adorable - I just wanna squish him, because he's so cute. And the stammer thing - at first I thought it was going to be something to be mocked, especially with the comments by his friends - but now I suppose Connor just goes along with it because he's so unconfrontational he wouldn't dare speak up. By taking the stammer as a serious issue it's made me love him more. And this could be something really, really captivating (if it isn't already!).

I'm also extremely intrigued about Georgia's storyline too and I hope we see a lot more of Georgie as well as Amelia and Connor's journey. With the consequences all interlinked to Vegas, I'm sure the plotlines will mesh well!

I can't wait to read more!

Loved it, update soon!

I really like this so far! Connor is so adorable and sweet! And I feel bad for him with the stuttering, but I like how he seems to only be comfortable around Mills. Update soon!

Love the story so far, update soon!

this is a really cool story, it definetly has potential. however, i do think it is a bit confusing. you might want to add to the setting description and what has happened so far. however, i realize that you don't have much written yet, and there is not much space for expanding, but think about that when you write some more!

like it so far