|Reviews for Camouflage|
| Violettree 5/6/10 . chapter 1
Great job on this poem. Keep writing!
| Ayx 3/5/10 . chapter 1
I really love this piece.
You say all you have to say
right in those few lines.
The beginning was familiar
but, the ending definately
made it unique.
| Isca 3/5/10 . chapter 1
I like the lines "devoid of adornment" and "ego hungry mind refuses to become enlightened to the true self" the best. The first because it's elegant & the latter because it's quite Freudian. :)
| recycle rhymes 3/4/10 . chapter 1
short, but it shows humanity as we know it. last few lines are my favourite.
| Brenda Agaro 3/4/10 . chapter 1
A poignant poem. It's so true. I like the "twistedly-rooted tree" part.