I had to read it twice, but I'm sure you're tired of hearing that. It was beautiful, although I didn't get everything, but than again, I'm sure that was intentional. I understood most of it and that's what's important. I like it. I'm going to steal your brain one day and see if there's any way for me to use it as my own.

I had to reread it a few times before i understood it, but overall, it was a good .

It kinda made me cry. Also did they have sex and did Innocence feel guilty for Loyal's pain? That was beautiful. I liked it all but only understood a good 80%.

Very,very beautiful and deep, too. Great job!;)

beautiful.

the way you have managed to tell such a clear story and fit so much emotion into such a brief piece of writing really says alot for your skill as a writer in my opinion.

good job. :)

I think I understood about 70 percent of that, but I liked 99 percent of it, and I believe this counts for something.

You make me so jealous. Goddamn you.