|Reviews for Mooonlight Sonata|
| actressen 5/28/10 . chapter 1
Well written. I feel like a poem like this could be much improved and expanded, but it is still good the way it is. I just feel like it could be better. As I said, it's still a good poem.
| Eternal Skies 5/5/10 . chapter 1
that's very beautiful!
i loved the imageries you used and i didn't find anything here pessimistic, actually it sorta cheered me up
| Punslinger 5/4/10 . chapter 1
I didn't find this as clever and amusing as some of your other wiork. But it is well-rhymed and creates an enchanting mood that I quite enjoyed.
| Ganondorf The Dark Knight 3/25/10 . chapter 1
There lurks a haunting, in a sense, feel to this that I am no doubt drawn to. The piece is rather easy-going and straight-forward, but almost beneath the veil of clouds you describe, there is more. The title fit well as I found this to be very musical and majestic.
| FelleLLoyd 3/12/10 . chapter 1
I like the different relations you've added to the moon & what great diction you've worked in. Though, I think the rhythm of this needs a wee bit of work. Nonetheless, love this piece.
| Isca 3/5/10 . chapter 1
"The birth of the moon struggling through the night." This is my favourite line from the poem; the word "struggling" definitely adds a nice sense of angst to the imagery.