Well written. I feel like a poem like this could be much improved and expanded, but it is still good the way it is. I just feel like it could be better. As I said, it's still a good poem.

that's very beautiful!

i loved the imageries you used and i didn't find anything here pessimistic, actually it sorta cheered me up

I didn't find this as clever and amusing as some of your other wiork. But it is well-rhymed and creates an enchanting mood that I quite enjoyed.

There lurks a haunting, in a sense, feel to this that I am no doubt drawn to. The piece is rather easy-going and straight-forward, but almost beneath the veil of clouds you describe, there is more. The title fit well as I found this to be very musical and majestic.

AV

I like the different relations you've added to the moon & what great diction you've worked in. Though, I think the rhythm of this needs a wee bit of work. Nonetheless, love this piece.

"The birth of the moon struggling through the night." This is my favourite line from the poem; the word "struggling" definitely adds a nice sense of angst to the imagery.