|Reviews for I'd say what I want|
| dragonflydreamer 5/22/10 . chapter 1
I love the contradictions in this. When I think of a loss of words, I think of silence, so the thing about screaming really broke my expectations.
Some of the wording in this could be adjusted, though. In the first line, "Words lost" seems like a separate idea than "I cannot find." Also, at the end, I think "lost words' would sound better as a sentence than "words lost."
Otherwise, interesting idea and good execution :)