|Reviews for I bet you're proud of what you've done|
| Little girl Big world 7/4/10 . chapter 1
This is short but holds a lot in it.
I like the repetition of broken me.
| ByYourSide 5/22/10 . chapter 1
I also read your most recent poem, and I have to say: I really really like your poems. I like... the rhythm, the flow, the melody. They're so different from a lot of poems I've read. You seem like a really creative person.
This poem just flows together really well and in a creative way, in my opinion, although I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe because you use simple words to convey ideas clearly-you do that very well-or maybe because of the repetition of "broken me."
My favorite part:
and all that escapes
my lips are broken
The lines flow together impeccably well. Amazing. -love-