|Reviews for The maiden stirs in his arms|
| dail-of-the-air 9/3/10 . chapter 1
Lovely meter. Reminds me of a more old-timey sort of writing. Quite beautiful.
| Punslinger 3/9/10 . chapter 1
Very nice. Highly sensual verging on the erotic, without going over the line. Just teasingly descriptive enough to make us wonder if the maiden is dreaming or living her fantasy.