|Reviews for Longing|
| Zanza8 3/26/12 . chapter 1
This poem I really liked, especially the line "I impose my solitude upon others" because it seems like that's something people tend to do a lot-impose what they are doing on others. You really seem to have expressed the problem that conflicting desires can create for people and I think about how we could make our lives so much easier if we just stepped back and took a breath. Nice work!
| AppleCrumble 10/5/11 . chapter 1
Great job, well done! :-D