|Reviews for Making A Living|
| FlamingInk57 7/2/10 . chapter 1
Well... that was short but awesome dude. Your writing style is really good and I like the end couple of lines too. This seems great and I hope to see more. Gread stuff dude.
| xRayne wolfx 5/5/10 . chapter 1
Wow very quick to read, cool. You got a good idea going on here. I hope to see more stuff in the future. Thanks again for the review in Glass one
| simpleplan13 5/5/10 . chapter 1
Thanks for participating in the Review Marathon!
"Instead we gathered brief cases"...briefcases
"news statistics"...news' statistics
"We looked a graphs"...at
"cheapest business suit."...suits (there's two of you at least and everything else is plural)
"through the story book"...storybook
I like the idea here. The comparisons are really great and it's an interesting take on not believing in fairy tales anymore. Not at all as cliche as I thought it would be from the first sentence. The only thing (other than those editing things) is the transition to flipping through the book. It seemed to come out of nowhere. Other than that well done.
| master 4/6/10 . chapter 1
it's good that is all.