I'm not supposed to be on the computer right now, but I feel I should say that I think you write very beautifully, especially in your descriptions. I wish I could critique you, but I'm an amateur, so that would be like the blind leading a person with perfect vision. LOL

Overall, I can't wait for the rest!

This is absolutely beautiful. It was as if emotions have been leaking out of my laptop - - your descriptions are beyond sublime. I also love the butterfly, and all the symbolisms that little insect can bring. This is utterly amazing.

- - Icarus.

Oh my goodness gracious, you write beautifully! Absolutely wonderfully! You have talent and limitless potential, so keep it up.

I'd really love to continue reading your story, it's great. So please continue, because you officially have a 'biggest fan'.

Thank you!

Rohini

I love it so far. So detailed C: