I'm usually too busy to review, but oh my gosh, this story is absolutely amazing! I reaaaalllllyyyyyy hope you're able to update soon! I'm going crazy!

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I know you started university, so you're probably hectically busy! So, no pressure, i know what that's like! {I'm not in university yet though, just in another country learning a new language and going to a new school etc...very time consuming! Although, i don't actually have to do any homework, so it's not really that bad...it would be if i understood it though! so ...oh man. I'm rambling.}

So. Update. sometime in the near/immediate future!

...Prettty please? WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? :D

Love from Danmark 3

Ok i have been readig all your stories and they are just greatly amazing just to let you know! I just started reading this story and was WAY to eager to have time and tell you how great the chapter was. So i will just tell you now:) Love every part of it EVERY! you always seem to suprise me and make love this sory more:D So from keeping from getting a mob together i would PLEASE PLEASE write the next chapter soon!:] I mean you are an amazing and wonderful writer! It might all sound corny but thats just how good you are:] HURRY PLEASE!

(I finally logged in! XD)

Anyway, I also forgot to mention that I absolutely adore Liam and Madeline's relationship. :) I definitely cannot wait until we find out what Liam's going to do. :D

Once again: Please update soon!

I couldn‘t log onto Fiction Press properly so I‘m making do with this. That‘s my username if you are wondering or wanting to reply.

Anyway, I just have to absolutely tell you that you are hella amazing. This story had me hooked from the first sentence, I swear. I read everything on my phone (and am currently reviewing on my phone too, due to log in problems) and I even stayed up all night last night just to get to this point (I started reading this last night). I‘m a little miffed that you haven‘t updated in like two months but please consider updating soon! The suspense is killing me!

While I was reading, I did notice you made some minor spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that can be easily overlooked. Something that bothered me however was that you kept using “bare“ instead of “bear“ (I think it was around the part with their confessions); you also kept switching Mark‘s ‘twin‘s‘ name from Tom to Tim at the beginning; and I am fairly sure you called Tory ‘Torie‘ at some point. Other than that, your writing is wonderful.

Please update soon!

I went through the entire story so quickly! it's so light-hearted and funny and with enough drama to keep me interested. I love Reece and Carson, but I adore Liam's story most of all. actually, I want to know what happens to Liam and Madeline, really.

Carson's emotions are perfect. the way she handles herself. the last scene with Landon was just so well-placed and perfect. I am somewhat rooting for Landon... most of all, I want Carson to be really, truly happy with THE person she chooses.

I hope you update soon. it's a really lovely story :)

I've been trying really hard to refrain from reviewing until I've finished reading all the chapters... but I couldn't help it.

First of all, I think this story is SO ADORABLE. I instantly fell in love with the characters and their personalities. You have amazing characters. (I think it also has to do with their names. Some of my favourites!)

I only have 2 areas of critism.

1) I found the story got a little to.. boring around the middle. I almost stopped reading.. but couldn't because, to be honest, I wanted to see how Madeline/Liam played out... cause I knew that somehow Carson would get it through her thick skull. I really like how you did that though.. get Carson to realize. It was kind of perfect. I think that it should've been, maybe a bit earlier, by heh, that's just me.

2) Grammar! I totally understand though... you're under pressure to update, update, update! And obviously you don't write for a living (or you wouldn't be on fictionpress!) Usually I notice the errors, but just skim over them... but I couldn't let this one go. "'Don't worry, Carse,' he said quietly, lightly touching my waste in a way that nobody would really notice." Haha, I think you meant "waist" as in on her body... not "waste" as in garbage... or feces... I read it and all I could do was imagine Reece touching her, er, excrement! Haha. Not a pretty sight. Really creepy, actually..

I'm sure once you're finished, you'll go through and edit it! So really, both my critisms are useless... lol. Anyway, I love this story! :) It's beautiful. And your website is great! Although, the character pictures aren't all quite as you described the characters, but oh well.:)

im so freaking excited for the next chapter!

Oh my, I love your story. I've been reading it incognito for awhile but I have finally gotten an account to review from.

I love how Liam's character grew as the story went on, and how you didn't rush the change from him being a jerk to him having actual feelings for Madeline.

Oh my God, no! I was just about to press the button for the next chapter when I realised there ISN'T a next chapter! Argh. Lol. Please, please for the love of your steadfast readers (me included, obvs, lol), update asap! :)

This was perfect! Ah.. Be still my heart, hehehe.

One word: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Yep, that's all. ;)

No, no, no, no, no! Everything was going so well. Why? Reece, the liar! Ha. Well... this chapter was a huge shocker.

Poor, poor Carson. She's in such a sticky situation now. I hope everything turns out for the better soon.

As much as I love the whole boy bestfriend overprotectiveness, the game at lunch made me cringe and say "oh, no" aloud. Still completely in love with this story!

Wow. Just.. wow. I literally cringed at the end when Carson crossed the "boundary". Whew. Pretty heated.