| Reviews for Once Upon a Bet |
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Celine 5/17/12 . chapter 3 I really love Once upon a bet :)and I'm glad to see that you already have chapter 20! I'm reading the other chapters all over again before reading chapter 20 :) Thanks and continue posting more stories! :) |
fallingformusic 5/15/12 . chapter 20Pleassse! Don't stop writing! I livecthus story so much and I need to know what happens! Ahh they're just such good characters! Your English is amazing by the way. |
TO-OLazyToLogin 5/12/12 . chapter 17To be honest, I'm really very dissapointed. What happened to willpower? Why can't she be a player? I feel really frustrated and if I wrote this, I wouldn't do it this stereotypically. |
lyssabo0o0 5/12/12 . chapter 20 I LOVE this story! I've followed since day one and you haven't updated for a while so I spent the whole day rereading it all! I have to say, I'm getting utterly annoyed with Alayna! She's so afraid of her feelings and I don't get Why she doesn't trust him! & they both admitted to like eachother, & she keeps talking about the dumb bet! She doesn't realize as Jared said, because of the bet shell let the ONE go, but what if the one is whom Shes in a bet with? She just wont let herself believe its real! & that he's telling the truth! Ughh that girl! Anyway please try to update soon! I love your story so much! -lyssa xoxox |
DA-chen1 5/11/12 . chapter 20Heyheyhey! Which great surprise! I hope, you are doing well? :-) I missed your story and your writing at all! I'm rereading old stories and none are greater or better than yours! Vince and Vae? We will see... ;-) But I love her inner-turmoil.. Sean is a sheep... and she is so freaking complicated! But I like her, for being not boring and she isn't predictable.. has a temper, this bitc.. :-P Great, keep going on! :-) Mira |
Midnight113 5/10/12 . chapter 20Oh wow, thanks for this chapter - I loved it! I remember this story so well, it's one of my favorites and I remember everything about it. What a nice surprise to see an update in my inbox, it made me smile. Great work, I loved her sister making an appearance and discussing the family matters that Alana has kept secret all this time. I'm thinking her father is involved with drugs or ill in some way. I hope she can trust Sean and share her past with him, oh and I can't wait to see them both lose the bet, lol. Thanks again and I hope to see more soon when you get a chance... I know what it's like to have life take over and change to the point where you never get a chance to do things like write and read. Regardless, I do love your work and I hope to see more of it. :) |
ghurl00 5/10/12 . chapter 20That was intense. And finally, I can almost hear what Alana's reason for transferring at New Haven. Can't wait for the next update! |
Alixermixer 5/10/12 . chapter 20Well I am still following you and I just want to say Congrats on everything in your life. I am so glad that there was a chapter without Taylor, I just wish she would jump off a roof. I wonder what was so bad about her father (maybe I missed something somewhere) Can't wait for more! |
zoba20 5/10/12 . chapter 20omg omg i am so happy ur back, loved the chapter and can't wait to read more. do not worry u still have me as a reader i am happy life has been good to you and i am glad u descided to write again. |
artistic dreamer 5/10/12 . chapter 20oohhhh you're back! when i saw the story update, i was like...wait...isn't this story a while ago...i actually thought it was finished or something but glad to see another chapter up! :) hope all is well with you and can't wait to read more! |
Mariposa-12 5/10/12 . chapter 20WOW! She's alive! :) I was so surprised to see the email saying you had uploaded a chapter. I have to admit, I check the words # to see if it really was a chapter or just an author's note. I'm so glad to see it was an update and that you're slightly back haha. I hope you get inspired again after not writing for so long. I've missed your updates! Looking forward to reading more from you and very happythat you're back and that your life has been busy, good busy. Thanks for this! loved it as always and i'm feeling bad for both Lana and Sean cause i would go crazy trying to figure you what was the truth and what's not. I don't blame her for not trusting him and for putting up walls. Thanks! ;) |
snerfanie 5/10/12 . chapter 20 Glad to see you back :) Great chapter. Look forward to the update. |
snerfanie 5/10/12 . chapter 20 Glad to see you back :) Great chapter. Look forward to the update. |
Jennifuuuur 1/27/12 . chapter 19 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEE update! you are KILLING ME! |
ana 12/26/11 . chapter 1 I absolutely love your story. .there Are a view grammer errors But damn, I stayed up until 7:00am reading this story, it had me wanted more and I can see the I hope you will update soon cuz this story Awesome I love it! So hope you update soon please:) |