i haven't read your past works (yet) but i'm definitely in love with this, and every single moment it lays out. i like that it has both the girl's and the boy's perspectives; sometimes i'm curious about what the other half is thinking, and they never expand on it and it drives me insane.

the last stanza, with the girl thinking about the boy; i like it, but i feel like it's a little out of place with the rest of the story.

sdhnadknj i just love this. gragh.

I love it. It's a nice way of displaying it. I don't think I've seen anyone do anything this way before. The story is a cute one, with hints of depressing moments and beautiful times. I really do like this.

Annie

Brilliant. Really brilliant. You were able to paint such vivid pictures in my head with just a few words. I commend you for that! :)

I enjoyed reading this one-of-a-kind piece. :)

I absolutely adore the beautiful way the stories intertwine into each other. It is so different and new that you can't help feel the words catch you, making you want to read on. I love it. (:

That was so pretty...

Wow, it's great. Going to be a great piece of art. Don't change it at all.

SO MUCH LOVE.

I do love it, yes

:D

This is really good. I love it.