Very nice! I like the new words that it has taught me :) Keep writing!
Anna :)

The longing sort of pleading here is lovely and wistful and again, is beautiful in its simplicity. You're good at simplicity. )

. darker shade of pale

Very sweet.

It's clever.

SirScott

The way this seems to naturally flow is very nice. Your vocabulary choices were appreciated. Simplistic, as a haiku should be; still, enjoyable.

Such a nice sound to it when you say it aloud ] Especially the first line

Beautiful and to the point. I have nothing else to say, as it is well written. :-)

Thoughtful and smart and simply excellent work.

Aw, I love natural images. But this is surprisingly unsurprising for one written by you..

I like the idea of a "peregrine heart", lovely free image. :)

All of the imagery and connotations in this work wonderfully. :)

Interesting, you want the heart of a falcon to stay with you but you don't want to be tied down? (I'm no good at Haiku)

The words flowed very well. Good haiku, Slinger.

Loved the idea, every word feels like it's carefully placed and it makes the haiku sound really good other than the meaning itself.

This bird-person feels rebellious, maybe adventurous, someone who wants to go everywhere.

I liked the term "jess" you, though this is my first time hearing it :D

I've been to a bird of prey show before (and actually ended up holding a Harris Hawk). So, naturally, this haiku was very special/personal for me.

"Peregrine heart, stay." That's kind of oxymoronic, really. A falcon's heart is free, so the fact that you paired it with "stay," is very crafty. I like this opening line. :)

I'm not sure about the syllable count of the second line. Is "gyre" two syllables? Is "while" two syllables? I guess it depends on pronounciation.

"I won't try to jess you." I love this ending; it's so beautiful and heart-wrenching.