EEP!

I can't believe it's over!

Love this story!

It's kind of sad, you know?

Also, I was thinking about this story today. So I was happy to see an update!

Great story! Thanks for writing!

And actually finishing it.

I hate when people don't finish stories that I love!

Hehe!

LOVE YOU.

[Even though I don't know you. But I've developed a sort of... invisible, non existent bond with you over my love of this story.]

Amanda

PS I ate this with my favorite dessert. It made it even better.

I loved and I can't believe that the next chap is the last ! This story rocks! Good work!

If you are talking about growing better in erring this story, then yes I think you have. It seems to male more sense now. I still want to know what the problem between Daniel and adam is. I thunk that Daniel is telling the truth in saying he doesn't hate Adam, so then what is the matter between them? I can't wait to see what happensnext!

*Speechless* I think these guys beat me to it. They are good fans. Perpare yourself, I am going to do something evil. You can kill me later (see how nice I am for giving you the permission? But do not say I didn't warn you that life will be pre-etty boring without me running around like crazy:P)...BUT! YOU PROMISED, CHICKA! You promised that you would do a ONE-SHOT with you-know-who (obvious much?) and I (put my hand on my heart) souley believe that your fans would be over exctatic! That is, if you guys motivate this chita to write a ONE-SHOT for Adam and Janet (Chimp):D Go on...you know, you wanna:D Did anybody even noticed this review? Not so speachless now, am I? *evil expression alongside with an evil laughter*. Du vet at du elsker meg:D

yes, daniel in this chapter!:D

very good and you did improve. Good work and update soon!

I can't even read the whole thing, excitement and all that. I'm just relieved that the silence wasn't dragged out. Maybe it still will be or whatever but at least Daniel knows why. Misunderstandings are only fun when they benefit. :)

Such a good turn and yet a worse one with it. Kathryn should get on her knees and beg for forgiveness. Heh, I bet that Olivia's going to have to do the same in the future.

OhMyGosh, I love your story!

Please don't make the next chapter the last!

Or... do a sequel or something *Makes puppydog eyes* Please?

And I'm so jealous your holiday started over there!

we have like 5 weeks left!

oh well, update soon please :D

'I don't know why.' Pssh. And I expected Adam to react that way. He was overprotective before and it was easy to tell that there was something going on between him and Daniel and it wasn't a good something. Why wouldn't the Mom stay and try to talk with her kids. Instead, she drops the bomb and walks away. Nice.

I can't believe this story is ending. I really love it and i do believe your writing has grown. I really look forward to reading the ending of this.

HELO!

I'm with you on the tired express. I got a puppy and I'm exhausted all the time. It doesn't help that I had a bad "health" day, so it's all fine now.

:: Dad used to stay in his study for hours and hours', just doing God knows what :: There was that random appastrophe after "...hours'," that I was like...err? So, that was all I caught.

I am so sorry that I can't give you more than that! You're writing has improved. A LOT! You're awesome! Keep writing!

S

i knew that adam's mystery girl was janet b/c i remembered the day at the pizza place and what kat told her about the party. I also knew who adam just hated. im really good at puzzles. this story is a puzzle and i love it!

Yes! I'm late on the review but life hectic!

this is great and I can't wait for more! :D

This is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter! hurry up man!

i knew it all along! i love this story