Andrew is one messed-up dude. You certainly come up with some good chracters! Awesome story; liked it!

:)

RSG

I was shivered while reading this.

I don't like gore...no, I hate it. but your portrayal of Andrew is (in my opinion) accurate. that's what a gore-lover but paranoid man would do.

Once again you give us an insight in the mind of a very disturbing character. You certainly are the master of the 'slice of death' genre (slice of life would be totally inappropriate).

I enjoyed it.

"he found the guy attractive, in a idiotic, soon-to-be-dead sense" was one of my favorite sentences.

So was: "Where the hell am I?" he managed out, coughing a few times before trying to actually move. "Interesting choice of words, my friend."

All in all a gruesome, well-crafted little piece.

(Though like always I wish you had fleshed out the main character somewhat and told me where he came from, a little something of his upbringing and so on...)