Wow, so I went through a rush of emotions. At first I felt bad for her, then I got angry at Todd because I felt sympathy for Renee, and then I felt kinda happy cause Kathy had moved on! I mean this was great, it was a beautifully written one-shot, and had me captivated the entire time! Good job!

omg that's so sad! I love it though. I can totally feel the main character's emotions. so vividly.

Interesting read! If I had it my way, there'd be a sequel of some sorts about her and Renee recovering and finding new squeezes. To me, this seems like the Wedding Singer and Made of Honor went at it and birthed this story. I like it. :)

Anyways, excellent use of punctuation and paragraph spacing. Can't stress enough how much I appreciate that in writers.

I also enjoyed Kathy. She seems very strong as a woman, being able to walk away from Todd. I also like how you also threw in some humor to lighten up the poignant atmosphere. Thumbs up all the way.

Interesting...

NEXT CHAPTER PLZ :O

Oh Kathleen, I love your writing. Even though I heard this story before, I loved reading it again.

The humor in your writing, even though its depressing, is very entertaining.

The overall story was wonderful as well as the writing.

I love you. And this.

Aww. That's such a terrible situation. I'm glad that Kathy decided to walk away. Her and Renee are both too good for Todd.

Anyway, I like how your story flows. The flashback in italics is very descriptive so we get a thorough history behind K,R and T.