|Reviews for The Beginning|
| mirandakane 10/8/12 . chapter 1
I liked this.
| Kitty Obsessive Disorder 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Cool story! I know it's just a one-shot, but I wouldn't mind learning how Deana succeeds in the world. Your stories are really good, but it would be nice if you just cleaned up your stories with some editing. Other than that, great job!