:( So beautiful and sad.

It's a lot like Romeo and Juliet.

I love it.

But it's so sad.

Brilliant stuff.

Wow. And I thought the OTHER one was depressing. Much the same commentary as before, although I would like to add that you sometimes had difficulty keeping a steady rhythm here. A decent poem, even if it does beg the question as to why YOU haven't slit your wrists yet, spending so much time thinking about stuff like this . . .