|Reviews for Two Years|
| WP 3/18/13 . chapter 1
I like it...we can feel the hurt, the emptiness...wondering when will it end.
| Zoec 3/24/10 . chapter 1
This piece has a nice flow to it, a sing song cadance. What i really liked (besides how well the rhyming scheme was) were the line in each paragraph. How they went, short-long-short-long. It went very well with the overall poem. Nicely done.
| Utada Rumiko 3/24/10 . chapter 1
| Postscript624 3/24/10 . chapter 1
You might be better served writing this as prose piece.