|Reviews for Will You?|
| Orion Demasecus 6/10/10 . chapter 1
Good poem. Shows a good perspective in regards to expectations. I personally do think that the line "If they don't, they will." didn't fit as well in the whole poem as it could have. Perhaps something like "Or they think they do." would have fit a little better.
Anyways that's just my opinion. Overall though good poem. Keep up the good work.