This was beautifully written :) I enjoyed it!

Hmm, I liked the flow of this a lot for some reason. It disjointed and almost ragged because of the word choice but it definitely worked. The only thing I didn't like was the last sentence. That seemed awkward but not in the good way. I think it was the repetition of "it" so soon. But other than that, nicely done.

Bravo. The title was just right for the whole thing

Hey,

This was really nice! I loved the personal touch you seemed to give it. It was a deep and meaningful poem, and I thought that it was very good. :D Keep writing!

ranDUMM