Reviews for Devotion and Desire
Andreussita 12/8/11 . chapter 11
Oh yes, it was worth the wait !

:D
The Dark One 12/5/11 . chapter 10
I absolutely adore/love this story, and I hope you continue it! I really want to know what happens with Juliet and Marcus!
sherrylynn 11/8/11 . chapter 10
I really like this story hope you update soon
Clouded and Instincts 11/2/11 . chapter 10
i LOVE this story! i really do! i hope u update soon
im 10/17/11 . chapter 10
Heyaaa.I apologize for being insistent but it has been quite a long time (at least for me)since you have updated.i hope everything is alright for you and i just want to let you know you would make a lot of people happy if you luck
Guest 9/5/11 . chapter 10
I don't think words can describe how much I love your story. Since I don't have an account on fp, I have a constant window open to your account on my iPod so I can check if you've updated. Please update! I think i'm dying of suspense.
Lilly 8/30/11 . chapter 10
I reread this, and while I love the story (please update soon!), I kept getting annoyed by the fact that you'd use semicolons or commas when a period was necessary. Please keep that in mind for the next chapter.
Lee 7/19/11 . chapter 10
Ok, so Juliet's been attacked by vampires, saved by Marcus, and was taken to his home for protection. She's naked right now, and he probably fails at the culinary arts. And...go!
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 4
yea

i liked that you added family time

why would the council not like it?

it does not seem like it's a rule

not if other demons have mixed blood

is it cuz they are royal?

or is their a legend that goes with this one?

trance
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 3
cool chapter

i like that it did not go right to the actin

though the middle had that dream

just one word

hot

lol

trance
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 2
i liked it

and the middle to end was steamy

wouldn't want to wake up to a stranger touching me though

is this going to be mostly about his thoughts

and the like?

Trance
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 1
great start

at first i thought this was going to be a fight chapter

but it turns out your guy finds his mate

watch she turn out to be human

or one that think she is

Trance
bloodlore 6/22/11 . chapter 9
I just wanted to let you know that this is my favorite story on this site. I hope you keep this story up because I love your plot and characters. I would seriously buy this right up if you sold it- I like it that much :)
Alex0007 5/19/11 . chapter 10
This is an extremely good story! Please update soon; I am eager to fing out what Marcus makes for her!

Alex
Hajaley 5/10/11 . chapter 10
I really like this story so far and you are really good at writing!

I love these type of stories

Marcus seems like a genuinely caring person and he is so sweet towards Juliet.

I’m just wondering how he will tell her his secret?

Please update soon :D
82 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 4 5 .. Last Next »