| Reviews for Devotion and Desire |
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Andreussita 12/8/11 . chapter 11Oh yes, it was worth the wait ! :D |
The Dark One 12/5/11 . chapter 10 I absolutely adore/love this story, and I hope you continue it! I really want to know what happens with Juliet and Marcus! |
sherrylynn 11/8/11 . chapter 10I really like this story hope you update soon |
Clouded and Instincts 11/2/11 . chapter 10i LOVE this story! i really do! i hope u update soon |
im 10/17/11 . chapter 10 Heyaaa.I apologize for being insistent but it has been quite a long time (at least for me)since you have updated.i hope everything is alright for you and i just want to let you know you would make a lot of people happy if you luck |
Guest 9/5/11 . chapter 10 I don't think words can describe how much I love your story. Since I don't have an account on fp, I have a constant window open to your account on my iPod so I can check if you've updated. Please update! I think i'm dying of suspense. |
Lilly 8/30/11 . chapter 10 I reread this, and while I love the story (please update soon!), I kept getting annoyed by the fact that you'd use semicolons or commas when a period was necessary. Please keep that in mind for the next chapter. |
Lee 7/19/11 . chapter 10 Ok, so Juliet's been attacked by vampires, saved by Marcus, and was taken to his home for protection. She's naked right now, and he probably fails at the culinary arts. And...go! |
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 4yea i liked that you added family time why would the council not like it? it does not seem like it's a rule not if other demons have mixed blood is it cuz they are royal? or is their a legend that goes with this one? trance |
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 3cool chapter i like that it did not go right to the actin though the middle had that dream just one word hot lol trance |
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 2i liked it and the middle to end was steamy wouldn't want to wake up to a stranger touching me though is this going to be mostly about his thoughts and the like? Trance |
Trance19666 7/1/11 . chapter 1great start at first i thought this was going to be a fight chapter but it turns out your guy finds his mate watch she turn out to be human or one that think she is Trance |
bloodlore 6/22/11 . chapter 9I just wanted to let you know that this is my favorite story on this site. I hope you keep this story up because I love your plot and characters. I would seriously buy this right up if you sold it- I like it that much :) |
Alex0007 5/19/11 . chapter 10This is an extremely good story! Please update soon; I am eager to fing out what Marcus makes for her! Alex |
Hajaley 5/10/11 . chapter 10I really like this story so far and you are really good at writing! I love these type of stories Marcus seems like a genuinely caring person and he is so sweet towards Juliet. I’m just wondering how he will tell her his secret? Please update soon :D |