|Reviews for Stumble, Bumble, Crumble|
| Ayame Kaoru 6/3/10 . chapter 1
wow! I wish I were as brave as Sally. I admire girls like that! I really liked the story, especially the ending :)
| Cynthia Brent 5/11/10 . chapter 1
I love this so much. It's not just the pie, it's her courage and the real feelings of wanting to hide things inside . . . like a piece of paper folding over and over. Great job!
| The Mandyfish 3/28/10 . chapter 1
hahahaha...i can relate to that...Pie flavoured kiss...that's really good and funny...keep up the work
| Faded-Whisper 3/26/10 . chapter 1
very nice, seriously! :D
please continue... I'M WAITING! :D
y do they meet in secret, anyway? sounds interesting, keep typing.