But I wanted Leslie to be with Jared. Is she going to be with Matt instead?

Wow! That's an awesome start! I love your story already!

And I have to say... A Percy Jackson AND Harry Potter reference in just ONE chapter? I LOVE YOU! :D

You better write a sequel, or I WILL KILL YOU! Story was amazing, but I wasn't exactly thrilled that he left :\ ANYWAY, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE write a sequel! I'll give you Moose Tracks ice-cream! And believe me, I don't share my ice-cream with just anyone. Seriously, though, good story. I enjoyed it, despite the ending. Remember my request, or you shall be destroyed! THANKS! - RoseBriar

i love this! I hate you cos you made me cry! ( but anyway! I loved jay and if you could do a spinoff about him...? Hehe also, please, please, please, pretty please with kitkat sprinkles and vanilla topping, do a oneshot of Jared and Leslie? PRETTY PLEASE? I miss their misguided awesomeness;)

OMGOSHH great story ! Awww i really wanted leslie and jared to end up together ! :5 But this ending was really fitting and the story really was a great read ! :) KEEP WRITING :)

Loved it

I really love this story. You described the emotion so clearly it actually made me cry when Kevin was telling what happened to Leslie. I would be lying if I told you, you aren't a good author eh? :)

*glares at dancingllama*... I think it's needless to say how PISSED OFF I am at you right now! H-ho-how could you do that to me! Let Jared and Leslie have a break up then NOT GET THEM BACK TOGETHER?

*counts to ten and breathes deeply* OK, sorry about that. But, you gotta admit you did deserve that a little...

It's just that, Jared and Leslie were so awesome together and...

I think I just died a little bit inside. But, seriously, that was an awesome story and I loved every second of it. Thank you :) I'm still trying to get over that ending... *Laughs*

Love PotOfGold

p.s: You might want to sue me for the abuse of your 'Add Story to Favorites' Button ;D

... I think I'm in love with Jay. Seriously, he's totally my fave character in this. He's awesome :P

I-I-I...

Loved it.

But i mean, come on!

Jared Leslie is how it rolls, ya know?

Sequel please?

I really liked this story. It made me laugh a lot and I was so impressed with it that I shared it with a friend when I was only on the second chapter. I really hope you write a sequel to it though.

Rachel

You could work on Jared's POV. It doesn't sound like a boy's thoughts, honestly. Let's not assume that all boys swear in their minds. This is getting predictable, but I'm still gonna read it :)

*Wipes tear from eyes* Cute, sad...*crying now* I *sniff* want *sniff* Him back. Cute chapter though!

YAY!

oh no. there should be a sequel about how leslie moves on with matt or something. then jared comes back and somehow they get back together again. i would love to read a sequel.