Awesome and I thought at a glance it was a fluf. The action was right on, not a word was wasted. Thank you for writting it . Please post soon:)

Wow! I read this story on a whim, and it turned out to be awesome! Some might say that it's the cliched teenage spy issue, but you've put a creative and unique spin on it, by not making her unknown and undercover, ie Alex Rider style. Update soon please!

:)Double Edged