|Reviews for Future Dreams|
| Jeremy R Walker 5/7/10 . chapter 1
Interesting premise and twist on a Ghost story I love it
| MaddersAhatter 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Very original idea!
But then that is your trademark - you have a novel way of looking at the world and it comes across.
| duckylamour 3/26/10 . chapter 1
This story moved along nicely and kept my attention. Very real and drew me in. It was taut and believable. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your work.
| Lydecker Jr 3/26/10 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed the change of time through the little girl's eyes. Her thought process was interesting and within reason. I am not an expert in language but, from the era the story hinted the girl originated from her diction seemed appropriate to me. I especially like the way you ended it.
"I was so tired I faded away at that point, and woke up here in the sunshine this morning."