Interesting premise and twist on a Ghost story I love it

Very original idea!

But then that is your trademark - you have a novel way of looking at the world and it comes across.

Loved it.

Nicely done.

This story moved along nicely and kept my attention. Very real and drew me in. It was taut and believable. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your work.

This was beautiful. I really enjoyed the change of time through the little girl's eyes. Her thought process was interesting and within reason. I am not an expert in language but, from the era the story hinted the girl originated from her diction seemed appropriate to me. I especially like the way you ended it.

"I was so tired I faded away at that point, and woke up here in the sunshine this morning."