|Reviews for The Paladin|
| atomic-pocket-watch 12/6/10 . chapter 1
you said it was open for interpretation so i'm going to interpret away (although i bet it's wrong :P). basically, i think that the girl is in love with the paladin but he's not accepted by everyone else. they chase after and basically try to tell him to piss off but he won't coz he has a right to stay on the hill. but they kill him or he kills himself coz he can't take it anymore and she hates it but in the end life is easier coz the spring comes. ok i've completely butchered you beautiful poem but i really liked it. i liked the fantasy/ mythical quality that it had about it. and the imagery was cool. you really have a talent :D
| mr mahler 7/4/10 . chapter 1
liking the imagery placed in your words...